- Illustrated Poetry
- Words of Warning
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- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoYou scared me a bit with your Warning at the Bio section. I am not only supposed to be nice but also not pompous. Sometimes Just when I get enthusiastic about some work I am told that I do tend to be …err, a bit pompous (not intentionally). And now I am self conscious (she might delete me…OUCH!)
In short it was great! I had to work through the lines and as they multiplied in density and narrowed they became more and more incoherent. In other words- a perfect demonstration of the content of the words through the process of the reading including the difficulty of doing so! (Weight vs. volume; quality vs. quantity). The color scheme and the web of lines at the back complete the packed stressful feeling go figure out your life in such a mess!
Top quality of word/visual art!
duddle146over 17 years agoColor hues in the illustration were lovely. Unfortunately the font was next to unreadable. Ah...well ~ a work in progress perhaps.
vic_elorover 18 years agoI assumed the difficulty in reading the poem was intential. I liked it.
My Erotic Trailover 18 years agoI have more problems with illustrated poetry than any other submission, trial and error is all I can say, offering patience, either that or I need glasses <laughing...
Art~
