- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Shooting the Breeze
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in fluctuation
contemplation
a rocking sensation
while life's at ease
reminiscing
memory kissing
tomorrows wishing
watching growing trees
triggering a smile
aimless for awhile
going a porch swing mile
just ...
shooting the breeze
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 18 years agoExcellent feeling here ~
Had me rocking in my chair
To the beat of your words.
seranadeover 18 years agoI can see you with a shot gun, shooting just to break the silence, or send those egrets flying by the hundreds. I would point out one thing;
triggering a smile
aimless for awhile
going a porch swing mile
'going', seems weak, I would try swaying, swinging, or rocking. I think it needs a stronger and more direct word in its place. Don't shoot me.
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