Beautiful You

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If I compared you to that,
of a butterfly-

Would you then be the wings,
that expand to flight of earth,
To inspire and to seize
every beautiful thought or verse.

With magnificent colors
bright and harmonic,

Like the ode to a song,
sung long,
Yet still youthful.

Though your beauty shines
ever greater,
than each magnitude
of your colors capture,

Would it be then,
with your delicate perch
and fluttering wing,
that I have found you,
ever more beautiful -
than an earth can dream,

If I compared you to that,
of a butterfly-

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
comparisons

What a complimentary way of comparing Someone ~ to a Butterfly.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Great!

The editing got done

And those typos that distract are gone.

Such small details have such a major impact!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
well

just found you back ....was wondering where you have been..and as you, I find your words always filling my mind with wonderous thoughts...ty for the comments also...come back soon...I know your busy...happy new year to you and the family...luvstoAngel...blue

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Glad to see you back and writing as beautiful as what you are writing about.

ty,bd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Lovely!

Very nice imagery! I liked this a lot!

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