Hope's Ray

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Hope’s Ray


A ray of light

Shines into the room
And scares away night’s darkest gloom

A ray of light

With its hope and promise too
A new day is now in bloom

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Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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Ray today, gone tomorrow.

GoldeniangelGoldeniangelabout 18 years ago
i like it

fun! =D and a little longer than the writer's block one... lol. are they goign to slowly grow as each one comes out?

seirously though, i like it a lot, i've always felt that way about light, chasing away gloom... you just put it so well it was almost as though i could actually see it happening!

*HUGS*

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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A light write of light

Lightening life's load.

(Bad, isn't it? Try saying it 3 times fast)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
hope

some shine with hope with a witty write while others gloom. <grin I am not sorry~ excellent poetry~

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 18 years ago
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I'm sorry, from cliché to shining cliché

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