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Click heremoonsoaked mulberries
gathered in purple crow night
feed mockingbird streams
seed returns to sea
spiraling within life’s thirst
aquatic womb reaps
sheets of rain falling
liquid sunshine overflows
in river swells of blue
water fowl plunder
trails of aquatic ribbons
and cold blooded prey
water beasts afloat
dead from flood’s raging river
nature equilized
roots reawaken
as life give up the spirit
form is forever
rain drenches serenity
twilight Possesses river
we ingest its beauty
still water reflects
its oaken evanescence
roots of a sapling
a banana leaf
unfurls
as currents
eye sees
I thouroughly enjoyed this set of haiku poetry, excellent flow from one to the next and the whole I got from the many smaller parts. This was my fav the first one and this one.
rain drenches serenity
twilight Possesses river
we ingest its beauty
great poetry here blue.
Agreed ~ don't need haiku in the title
To appreciate these poetic snippets.
I, too would drop the Haiku from the title, although the sentiments expressed here are often found in haiku.
I like it, don't know about the title. I'd drop the
haiku. Good flow like a river should have, St. John's?
sand s.
Just beautiful Blue!
loved the rain drenches serinity stanza!
awesome job as usual!
**HUGS**
~LB~