Play Things

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My heart shoots out flaming arrows that can pierce men's souls.
They fall to the ground and obey my every whim and command.
Surrounding me on hands and knees naked, adorned, and glistening.
They see to my every need as I am their queen of the night!
Piercing me and satisfying me, what more do I need?
"Faster and harder!" I command
They obey me as they should
Men are my play things to do with as I see fit.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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You've got some powerful images here, diluted with a few too many words. I've taken the liberty below to offer one possible quickie suggestion - you can tell me to cram it or play with it some more.

My heart shoots flaming arrows

to pierce men's souls;

they fall to the ground,

obey my every whim and command.

Surrounded by their groveling mass,

on hands and knees naked, adorned, and glistening;

they serve my every need,

for I am their queen of the night!

Piercing and satisfying me,

what more do I need?

"Faster and harder!" I command;

they obey as they should,

men are my playthings,

to use as I will.

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