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Click hereFloating in a sea
Of Me
eyes remain closed
behind the caressing shadowy turns of silk
wrists, ankles tethered to the four corners
of the cool brass bed
silently purring
a demeanor of sheer contentment
loins aching for flesh to flesh
nipples reaching in scratchy ache
buttery hot wetness
the sea
Of Me
I absolutely love this. As much of your writing does, this gives me butterflies and a visual that is oh so real...
sensuous, silky and makes me want to purr... do not at all agree with the commentator below - loved the unusual use of language to create touch and feel.
Nice idea and setting. However, I can't help but feel your intent on descriptive phrases is off the mark. It almost seems as if you're trying re-invent the english language. your descriptive phrases are distracting from the texture of the poem. Almost making it feel like teflon more than silk. You need to use complimentive words and companion verbs and adverbs to create a flowing and fully textured poem.
is a comment with no substance but a high score
some people here believe that is all you should leave