- Non-Erotic Poetry
- "Slow"
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Click hereSlow..., slow was the day.
Positioned by the door I moodily wait.
Maybe it was time..., or fate.
And I stay,
wind, pleasing my face.
Now in the saturated dusk, a sweet day.
I am haloed in the wish.
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agosoftly in repose - the act of waiting is performed. This poem flows so soft and smooth. Exquisite!
wildsweetonealmost 18 years agoHi! I like your poem. I've never seen ellipses and commas used in the way you have and it makes for interesting reading. Have you given thought to using spacing instead to give the pauses whilst reading? It's worth trying. :)
I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
wildsweetone
