- Erotic Poetry
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Click hereit's not the post coitus
it's the post post post coitus
that gets me every time
the glancing over, three hours later
at hair still a little all over the place
watching lips blow steam
off her favorite indian mug
and eyes not watching tv,
not really
saying nothing, just flicking
popcorn in her direction
until rewarded with a pink tongue
and a weary smile, a glance, a laugh
the gift of knowing,
still knowing
- COMMENTS
McKennaalmost 18 years agoYou've captured so perfectly those post (post post!) coital moments. You share with the reader your private moments in such a way that allows them to feel as if they aren't invading, but rather invited in to share those privy moments between lovers; In so doing, you've allowed the reader to remember their own similar moments. Nicely done. Fun, playful, familiar, tender-- these are all the emotions your poem has evoked.
