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Click hereAcross the aisle,
features calm
as a pancake, sits
a cleft-chinned
porcelain doll.
She eats
a cheese sandwich,
placid as the cow
whose curdled milk
sits yellow in her bread.
The rain has stopped
and here is Delft.
makes me prone to puns, like "cutting the cheese". As a little "slice" of life, I like it, structure, word play, etc.
MNS
this poem was mentioned in the thread, "New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the literary journey (~_~)
You've captured a moment in time. Your imagery is deft, esp
'a cleft-chinned
porcelain doll.'
which was my favourite here. It makes me want to go to Holland.
An excellent piece of pure poetry.