- Erotic Poetry
- 2. from Love Poems of Mari Akiko
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As we awaken
our love clings
like morning dew
the cool moisture
pooled between us.
Mari
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoAwakening in the cool of the morning ~ before the humidity takes over ~ a sweet togetherness.
KOLKOREover 17 years agoNot much to add in a real serious way. Maybe just a follow up to My Erotic Trail. Had I had to read this very same poem in mid August in the Washington DC area where I live, I just wonder if the moisture image would have worked just as well...
Maybe there are seasons for poems too?
My Erotic Trailover 17 years agoI liked your poem, perhaps it is just the humidity of Texas, but my sweetness and I often chuckle about the pool of hot moisture our bodies create, so... I can relate (~_~) nice write!
