Contoured

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bluerains
bluerains
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Benevolent acolyte drones
in frozen faces,
move the tired, hungry, the poor
with resonating voices.

Paid to walk in peace clothes
they lick your wounds
with glowing promises
from tongues tangled
in shadowed wisdom.

Forgiveness lingers in
silent messages sealed in
tears and sweat and
pain drops slip sliding
into themselves,
their echoes exfoliated.

bluerains
bluerains
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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailover 17 years ago
I have no idea

what you are talking about.

Some of it sounds poetic, where is the concrete anchor for the poetry to swirl around?

do, do

not see

lobomaolobomaoover 17 years ago
•) delicious blue

so we too are too

left to our petty peace of pieces

discards carding on the folded floor

we leave left wanting for nothing

yet in hearts we desire all the more

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
contoured

I've been contoured <grin One of the reasons <grin I enjoy reading your poetry is that I sometimes learn a new word (~_~) thanks for sharing... blue

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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I can't help but picture

Homeless folk being fed

While self-important volunteers

Hover over them

Letting them know of all their

Shortcomings.