Stretched Shimmy

Poem Info
101 words
4.8
2.2k
0
Poem does not have any tags
Share this Poem

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here
sensuall
sensuall
1 Followers

Pantyhose stretched to the hilt red-rodded nails fingers slithered sloshed lips oozing while digging the cushions frenetically heaving to the fingered ball slipping to the wrist toes and calves strain to the iron pose muscled pained delight voice gaggling spitting furnaced shouts sloshing cunted canyon spitting more foam your mouthed phlegm glisten spidered strands cramming your conscience ripped hose driven into cunted gorge rubbed to burn insides tasted ground between the molared frenzy black heels shoved up and toes taken to driving that footed insanity
take her foot and slurp your juices her toes just fit the cunt's crazed obsession.

sensuall
sensuall
1 Followers
Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
5 Comments
Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
wow!

when I saw the format, I thought...oh dear...what a mess.

I was wrong, it works great!! sounds frenetic, anxious and excited

great piece you have!!

maria

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
....

oh hell yeah.

i am digging this much. way to go, you poet you.

curt

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
****

This would make a great audio poem - slam-dunk style.

Tess

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Visually marvelous!

Images, allusions, metaphors come directly toward the readers and crash them squarely between startled eyes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Raw

You have an interesting style, feels like stream of consciousness, mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

Share this Poem