Alone

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Nightime, it's all quiet around me.
I lift my head, looking up into the dark sky.
The full moon is looking down on me,
Seems like he asking "Are you loneley too?"
The wind is moving leaves around,
blowing softly across my face,
like a hand gentely touching my skin,
like a soft kiss on my forhead.
A single tear slides down my face,
leaving a wet trail on my cheek.
A voice calling my name,
saying words of comfort,
words of hope, happyness and love.
As I turn and look around me
I see...Not a soul.
Am I alone again or still?

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Nocturnal

A moody nocturnal piece ~ the silence of the darkness when thoughts come out to play.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
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Delightful, well chosen phrases expressing the power of loneliness.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Well choosen words bring impact to the haunting feel of loneliness. [additional comments under separate cover.]