Three hours earlier

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So recent, so fresh and close
The sheets not even made on the bed
As she slips her jeans back on
Pausing just a moment for a portrait

Captured there, button still open and undone
Just as easily taken off again
As put on before she leaves
And she stands there wanting to be seen

Breasts bared, hair tussled, skin flushed
The blue denim snug about her hips
Hanging low, heavy with sensuality
And she puts on her shoes

Before she dresses further to savor
The moment in her mind over and over again

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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyabout 17 years ago
Very nice

The subtlety of erotica is a woman or a man in the stages of getting dressed. A hint of what lies beneath making a person wonder. . .are they dressing for danger or covering up their sin. . . Lovely work. ~ Red.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
What..

a beautiful image your words paint...

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
After...

Getting dressed after the event can be just as sexy sometimes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
3 hours later, after-poem

This is a very good erotic piece, Sal. It's a streamlined sensual image. Enjoyed much, thank you.

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEabout 17 years ago
Sigh

I can picture this in my mind so easily. Beautiful imagery.

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