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bluerains
bluerains
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Sculptured by a blue lake reflection,
saltblinded from elemental star tears,
my goodbye kisses say hello,
yours say goodbye.

bluerains
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sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesabout 17 years ago
There is NOTHING

better than when you can take

4 lines and leave impact, and

seal thoughts that would have

taken some to ten...

the portal of blu is open,

enjoy'd the waves! luv2theblu.

-sGp-

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
perception

is not always what it seems to be when you take off the glasses

FifthFlowerFifthFlowerabout 17 years ago
Remember this one

I remember this from the sensual metaphors forum. I can imagine kissing someone who is trying to leave in a way that might make them want to stay, or at least delay their departure. The "tears" though make me think this is not likely to happen this time.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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That last line really gives the whole piece its sad and deflated feel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Very nice

A bit melancholy, still beautiful the all same and you were able to sneak 'blue' and 'water' in there too, didn't you? Thank you, enjoyed this much.

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