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Countless hours on the phone revealing to each other our dreams and deepest desires,
It’s comforting to find someone willing to be so open in the beginning,
Can this really be true have I found someone like me?
Ready to explore the realm of happiness,
that I have for so long wanted to visit and possibly make home,
these emotions feel rushed but they feel right,
there is no doubt that I want this,
the bliss of being taken to ecstasy in the blink of an eye,
the only word necessary is YES!
YES I will bring your heart delight,
YES I will bring your soul joy,
YES I will bring your mind tranquility,
Yes I will bring your breath relaxation,
And YES I will take your body to a venue in paradise that will bring you nothing but immortal zest,
but the only thing we both have to do is simply say YES!
YES to the honesty,
YES to the loyalty,
And YES to the heart felt moments that lay ahead of us,
It’s amazing how so much intensity can come from just saying YES!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoNot bad at all. It's a powerful poem and "yes" is a very powerful word.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoYes, yes, yes! This poem is so powerful and sweet at the same time. It totally summarizes what I would like a certain someone to know. *sigh*
Anonymousabout 17 years agoFor your first submission this isn't bad at all. In fact I liked it a lot! Your punctuation needs a bit of work though cause you put commas in places they shouldn't be...unless it was supposed to be like that for some reason. Nonetheless, kudos to you.
