Miss You

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nz_marie
nz_marie
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It aches without you
A splinter in my flesh
that I dare not remove
Reminds me
Never want to heal
don’t wish to forget
can't just move on
Rewind us
Come back to me
awaken me again
make me fully alive
Relinquish you

nz_marie
nz_marie
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luvthehobbyluvthehobbyover 16 years ago
Thank you Marie

How true, the words you put to the web are a true look at life and relationships. Thank you, and don't forget about second chances.

larrydownunderlarrydownunderalmost 17 years ago
nice piece

Great piece

Not wanting to forget and trying to recapture a love that brought you alive a love thats full of rapture

nz_marienz_mariealmost 17 years agoAuthor
Relinquish

I meant Relinquish as in give yourself up, surrender yourself. Thanks for your comment Amy :)

AmyfriendAmyfriendalmost 17 years ago
I enjoyed the poem...but...

the last line did not make sense... "Relinquish you" = to give up, let go.

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