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Shadow water ripples
the two shadows that come together
part
then come together
moving black
on a all white backdrop
the shadows:
undefined
yet
clearly defined
in their movements
together
apart
together
apart
an unseen scream pierces the night.
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Epmd607almost 17 years agoIt's almost satire?
is this satire? it seems like you're making fun of some of the writers here, probably not though--dig a little deeper for yer metaphors. this is on the edge of satire, a few word changes and you'd be set.
