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garthburgandyalmost 10 years agoReally simple
But extremely enjoyable. It's one of the few poems that I've seen that seem really natural, like it's not trying to show off. Well done, indeed.
wildsweetoneover 16 years agoPoetry Forum
i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. - wildsweetone
(the 50% temp rating is so that it does not affect future ratings.)
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