Give me the Darkness

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Give me the darkness where obscenity wanders,
spiderlings creeping under deep lichen stones.
No moon to glitter on blood drenched fangs
as I slither to meet my forbidden destiny.

Beware all ye that dare to enter the stench
of my underworld caverns, even now preparing,
with jet black wings to launch upon the unwary
maiden in her lily white bed, the nightmare,
the phallus of horror imbedded deep within.
Reaching down to devour her deepest soul
seeding unspeakable madness, her eyes no
longer seeing life, feeling only degradation.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
to the point but

"deepest soul" ? and the change of point of view from the doer to the victim is a little bland.

AngelineAngelineover 16 years ago
I like any poem that uses "spiderlings" so deftly

It's creepy and funny at the same time. It made me think of Ursela from Disney's The Little Mermaid. :)

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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A little erotic horror to help put a little chill in this +30° C day {that's +90° F old style}.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 16 years ago
That last line ...

is a three pointer !! I love the darkness that surrounds your imagery and how you keep us spellbound with "what's next" and "where are we going?" ... Tight flow with a lot of twisty turns, love it ~!!! More Please ~~!!

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