Define a Line

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SunrockSin
SunrockSin
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Define a line
that curves a subtle
inward arc
intersecting between
warm breath
and an oblique whimper,

the voice, wavering
delicate pathways
undulating
linear tone and
sensation.

Still pining more
to press
an indentation – fill
the silent chasm
with sound

and shape a beginning
deep inside
a single point,
arching into a rhythm,
a line that curves.

 

SunrockSin
SunrockSin
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sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesabout 16 years ago
WOW...

you took me in with 'warm breath

and an oblique whimper,'.. and I

finished with whispy warm breath,

scroll up, and read again.. this

was truly a *fantastic* piece of sensual

erotic writing, to my core.. and more.

sGp

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
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I don't have much more to add than previous commenters have said other then saying I appreciate your poetry. This poem is a great example of your work and erotic poetry without being porny. Very sexy, thanks.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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EROTIC!!! This is really good, engaging the reader to use his mind to create a highly charged picture. It doesn't use crude and obvious simple vulgarities; it's subtle in its brush strokes and what's happening here is really HOT!

AngelineAngelineabout 16 years ago
Excellent Writing!

I love when it when I see a poet do this: write erotica that really works with no graphic language (and you barely even mention anything human!). Great job! Your poem has been reviewed and recommended in the New Poems Reviews thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thank you for the read! :-)

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