- Non-Erotic Poetry
- How to 'eat' a banana
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Slowly unzip each layer
one by one
exposing you to my
luscious lips,
My tongue tip slowly
sliiiiides
the length,
tasting
gently nibbling.
Engulfing sweet and delectable
sucking in each mouthful
till I must swallow ... swallow .....
- COMMENTS
sweet GA peachesabout 16 years agofor a banana ? uh-huh.. what an enticing little
number, quick wit and full of luscious flavor to
savor !! ...... I think I need a banana ! *winks*
sGp
LeBrozabout 16 years agoBananas and plums — okay, you have your fruit and with my different taste, I'll have mine. Am with Angeline on those ellipses; would have been better after the first swallow if you'd skipped a line and then put the second swallow alone on its own line.
Angelineabout 16 years agowith a side order of plums, right? :-)
I'm not wild about ellipsis marks in poems and I think this topic is a tough one to do without cliche, so metaphor is a good way to go.
Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review Thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum. Thanks for the read!
