The bogeyman

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She said,
I'm hiding from the bogeyman,
as she crouched behind the stair.
If I keep myself real quiet
he'll never know I'm here.
He comes to see me most nights
with fingers cold and thin
I hide beneath the blanket
but he just climbs on in.
Mum says there is no bogeyman
but I know that isn't right
Daddy in the daytime;
bogeyman at night.

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RhymeSmithRhymeSmithabout 16 years ago
Ouch!

In keeping with my input to the thread on comments, well done.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Superbly done expression of horror and innocence.

champagne1982champagne1982about 16 years ago
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Your use of rhyme in this poem adds the contradiction of childlike development mixed into an all too adult realm of experience. You say just enough and I'm glad you chose to say it out loud.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 16 years ago
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mentioned on literotica's poetry forum in the new poems review thread. :)

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
where even bogeyman pales

A tale of man made torment chills you worse than the scariest bogeyman.

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