women bleed

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KR
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blood stained the bathtub
there was no notice
until I saw the redness
feathered in the water
a feather from red wings of the menstruation angel
I thought
as I finished my ablutions
then questing fingers found
the crimson droplets were from nicking my myself
as I shaved my pubis bare
no worries, no fuss,
women bleed all the time
for one reason or another

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 16 years ago
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the last two lines are cliched, menstruation angel, now that's a line, feather is needlessly duplicated. Sorry about your defoliation. It'll grow back, bushey as ever.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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An unexpected way the subject was treated, though you may want to do a bit of editing on something that slipped by you, "from nicking my myself."<br>

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Those last two lines are strongest, carrying so many possible meanings to think on.

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