Landscape in Lavendar

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ABSTRUSE
ABSTRUSE
127 Followers

Beneath a tree of purple blossoms
like snowflakes falling to earth,
forest floor, our carpet
the book of poems rest on delicate fingers

Petals crushed between my fingers
fragrant with perfume
content to lie on my side
listening,
your voice like song
pervading my senses

You smile,
closing the book
sealing inside silky petals -
reminders of this moment,
as you lie down beside me

Fingertips seeking out your face
gliding beneath your chin
pulling you closer
Lips as soft as the petals
that soon cover us
cloaking us in an immortal embrace

ABSTRUSE
ABSTRUSE
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

This really remains one of my favorite poems. It's been years since I first discovered it. From beginning to end, it's simplistic beauty is enthralling. Well done.

cloudycloudyalmost 16 years ago
how the hell....

did you sneak not one, but TWO poems past me? Obviously, we're having communications issues.

Very lovely and romantic poem. It reminds me a little of what Elizabeth Barrett Browning wrote. A little. ;) Good job.

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bluebellbluebellalmost 16 years ago
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It's not easy to properly capture a moment with words. In all its senses. But you do here. I can even smell it. You have a beautifully delicate way with words, Abs, and I enjoy that immensely. Thank you for sharing.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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A sweet and pretty romantic vision.

NirvanadragonesNirvanadragonesalmost 16 years ago
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Purple moments with you are sublime.