- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Mephitic City of Anon
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the walls of anon built high and long but
tickle each eye with surprises. the moat's
full of goats, and bodies of bloat and glut,
smut and psoriasis. sweet as a rote,
yet warbling, note the birds of anon do
yell. 'be ye a bell, you suck like hell!!' each
night at two they yark. their green poo like glue
runs down the town walls so what do we preach
from this lesson? the smell, not the yell, (though
it be swell if one wants for no sleep at
two in the morning) is really what blows.
you see, green pee is sweet to me, but shat
splat – barf! yicky and yarf! it sticks to what-
ever it touches. of anon i'm shut.
- COMMENTS
normal jeanalmost 16 years agoand can just feel you fuming as you pounded away at the keys. BB was right in a comment he left for you a while back, giving in to the anonymous ones who just seem to want a response like this ( poem) will kill you.
They're nuts, ignore them, that will piss'em off, but writing poems directed at them just fuels their petty little fires. I've had a couple of trolls, i know how it feels and learned the hard way, wanting to get my feelings vindicated whatever the cost to my health and the cost is about 150 a month in BP meds and mood stabilizers, which don't really work that good anyway....chill, smile, write something heavenly, without bloated goats, gout and psoriosis. I didn't get that part either, sorry.
NJ
WickedEvealmost 16 years agoHmm... The psoriasis comment on your poem doesn't seem to really be aimed at poetry. I'm a diabetic and I don't think I'd be offended by some poetically negative words on the disease. As far as poetry goes, "psoriasis" seems odd in the poem. I think leprosy would have made more sense -- as odd as that sounds.
UnderYourSpellalmost 16 years agoDon't suppose the poor souls suffering from psoriasis will be too happy that they are in there with puke etc
normal jeanalmost 16 years agodo anonymous comments bug you that much?
I enjoyed the funky old english spin ye put upon it all.
NJ
LeBrozalmost 16 years agoThis poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>
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