pick ur poison

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god and the devil chase each others tales
encircling a ring of guilt and confusion

hands warding defeat of impending union
like two opponents in a Mexican tag team match

trying to fuck each other first in the ass


blue-throated siva on kailash pale
hands wheel in a blur of constant reunion

erect lingam sprouts rooted in yonis womb
face shines in composures both gloom and light

hes at peace with himself, no need for KY


pick ur poison

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SadeanSadeanover 15 years ago
You were right

I loved it. So many things going on here that I can barely get my head round it all! I mean that in a good way, of course. I like action. :)

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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I realize that by using "ur" you're keeping the poem casual, but you do have a hyphenated word. So I'd go ahead and also use "he's" or go with "he is." Other than that... interesting poem.

miss_trustmiss_trustover 15 years ago
enjoyed

i enjoyed this poem as i have several of your others. My one reservation: amidst all these fantastic images and references, things like 'ur' and a lack of apostrophes to denote possessive in 'others' and 'hes' bother me... Regardless, you write well & i hope to read more.