- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Garden Wall
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In time
Warm sun returns
And thistle turns to seed
While I remain here, mortar bound
They flee.
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Survivor Poem #3
Form Cinquain (Crapsey's)
Trigger 22 point of view of a red clay brick.
- COMMENTS
Maria2394about 15 years agoyou took me back to my +home+....my garden. I miss it,so much
loved your poem, BTW
xox
~m
Anonymousabout 15 years agoI thought this was an excellent combination of the form and trigger.
It was much more thought provoking than I would have imagined someone could get with this combination.
UnderYourSpellabout 15 years agoThis is wonderful I am using it as a study piece to try and get mine right!
tiffnhoneyabout 15 years agoFantastic form...and wonderful how something so concisely written can actually make you think from the perspective of a brick wall. Great :)
