dancing semaphore

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And what first drew us near? Your words.
Lives apart, still I hear your words.

Just a slick wish and cricket call,
I tripped just to fall near your words.

True tune could never tell me more
My quick crush love I hear your words.

Daffodils bloom, water runs clear
Skylarks swoop to be near your words.

This silent death cannot erase-
Sweet kiss, salt tear, your words, your words!


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Survivor Challenge
Form E: Ghazal
Trigger 12: skylark

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Epmd607Epmd607about 15 years ago
true tune works

it's a good halfsy. bflag is just muddled.

bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
true tune

was the only imperfection for me. I probably couldn't explain why, but it don't matter because it's a petty imperfection and probably only to my ear.