There should be more than this

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We never knew what winds
came, we never
saw her ragged edges
oozing, slithering
crawling to where
He needed. she kept
asking, crying slowly
till he looked,
again, to her.

Flashed eyes and smoky glimpses
of little wordy pleadings
she came often, whenever
He called, but
never stayed
she knew he wanted it
yet he asked not

Creepings are such slow torments
needings are such slight ripples
bindings are such tightly woven strands
wantings are so slight a desire
hopes can be spouting frothings
flesh swollen, reddened quivers delicately

Flowers pistils petals stamens
all hold her essence for him

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AngelineAngelineabout 15 years ago
What Eve said!

Oh I got a rush from reading a new Razz poem after all this time. Hope this portends more from you as I've always loved reading your poetry. Welcome back. :-)

WickedEveWickedEveabout 15 years ago
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Good poem and good to see your poetry again! These lines are very good: Creepings are such slow torments/needings are such slight ripples