- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Frozen
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Hi!! This is my THIRD attempt on poem section LOL. I'm not sleepy yet so I figured I submit another one :D
Hope you guys will like this too...
Don't forget to VOTE and COMMENT!!
THANKS
With love, Jayleen
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Frozen
My heart wallowed,
Bleeding like the heavy rain,
Washing away my serenity,
My breath taken away,
Frozen,
Deep inside...
Where's the courage?
To face all of this,
So alone,
I couldn't let it go,
I couldn't let myself see,
The truth behind the veil of life...
Baby, you were gone,
So far away from me,
I tried to reach out,
Trying to touch your hand,
But I couldn't...
Baby, you were gone,
Leaving me frozen,
In my state of despair,
Of shattered heart and soul...
- COMMENTS
GuiltyPleasureabout 15 years ago... in your poem but the small speech before each one you post. Dispense with that and follow bflagsst's advice and you'll certainly improve.
Tess
Jayleen88about 15 years agoAuthorYeah, don't worry, I won't put nonsense in the poem... Thanks!!
bflagsstabout 15 years agobut on your third submission to the poetry section LOL. I think this is valid, no one's gonna want to read your actual poem if you keep putting this silly nonsense before the poem.
