Wanting it back

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Remembering the fun times we had
The kisses we shared
The times we made love
The nights we just talked.

I miss those times
The closeness we had
The bond that was formed
The love that we had.

Is it so wrong
To want it all back?
To have it that way again?
You in my life, loving me still.

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bflagsstbflagsstalmost 15 years ago
too general

a poem isn't interesting just talking about the 'times we had' you have to actually give personal details and feelings and bring the reader into the recollection.