- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Pre Globe; beyond the city walls
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Walls echo now the words of bards unheard,
and all the players ghostly haunting boards,
last nights past, then older times reword
walls echo now the words of bards unheard.
In slots of light dust particles are stirred
this memory lingers a snapshot still records,
walls echo now the words of bards unheard
and all the players ghostly haunting boards.
Poetry Survivor
Poets Choice Trigger 40
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI really like the poem overall and I think it does well with the trigger. I would only suggest that the lines be kept the same metrical length. I'll pass along a piece of wisdom I received in a comment once. It's usually better for the ending words to have more variety of sound. Your ending words are different, but all end in basically an "rd" sound. Nice poem though. Keep them coming!
