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- Erotic Haiku #4
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Click here midnight heatwave
a kiss on the couch —
naked and twisting
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jthserraabout 14 years agonicely erotic
but leans a bit away from a haiku moment I think. It might be the heatwave, I wonder if heat might work better. "naked and twisting" has me a bit torn, the ing on twist seems to take it out of the moment. It is hot though.
jth
ps. it is nice to read haiku from someone who knows what it is. keep posting them...
