Bathing Nocturne

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vrosej10
vrosej10
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A violin without strings, she kneels
With a neck exceeding finest carved wood
Her hand and sponge linger by candlelight
Dripping across her shoulders
Extending my ecstasy
Long enough for me to blaze
She crazes me as she bathes her breasts
Nipples colder, then harder
Sponge going lower and pausing, not briefly
She tests my resolve; drops slip slowly down her spine
Plunging between her flawless cheeks
And I find myself delving in behind them.

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normal jeannormal jeanover 13 years ago
I like this one

but it would be more effective if you changed some of the gerunds into active verbs. very nice images. you are a talent growing stronger with each post.

~ NJ

fridayamfridayamalmost 14 years ago
Lovely images

beautiful setting. Very fine. That first line is so good.

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoalmost 14 years ago
You knew I would love this

didn't you?

It made me wet!

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