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- The Other One with the Same Name
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Click hereTo the sea's hushed, breathy beat
Rocking not thrusting
Testing his endurance
As he pants and pushes in
In the winter night
And there's the scent of something
Something I can't define
But it's still vivid in my mind now
Even as I write
Remembering those cold sheets
On that single bed where I bled slightly
In that tiny flat above the sea.
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fridayamover 13 years agoI love this
and its simple words and zooming focus. Gorgeous and sweetly sad.
twelveooneover 13 years ago*
these two lines are counterproductive
But it's still vivid in my mind now
Even as I write
