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- Erotic Poetry
- fingers trace
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fingers trace
the waning moonlight
on your breast
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twelveooneover 13 years ago*
she does have a point, lacks ambiguity
waning moonlight
your breast traces
my fingers
play connect the dots
vrosej10over 13 years agoYou've got a boner for moonlight ain't you? :)
Doesn't quite make it as a haiku technically (two images need to have a disconnect, one can't be the result of the other) but it works for me as a short poem of free form. It's so close to a lune that I am almost sorry you didn't hit that by one word....
