1000 kisses

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E-Nymph
E-Nymph
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a thousand kisses I wish to send
to a thousand places on your skin.
trails of tender longing
weave like fine lace in my mind-
wrapping it's ghost like caress around you.
I yearn to feel your touch on my skin,
within my heart.
in dreams my soul flies to where we will never part.
when I think of you I am happy.

~5/19/02

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Kiss Showers...

Perfect contentment ~ found in dreams ~ as two lovers seek that elusive happiness.

sacksackover 17 years ago
I like the last line, actually....

I am more concerned about some of the cliches that are almost inevitable when you have a poem about a very popular topic. I don't know how to avoid them completely, which is why I very rarely use this particular theme in my own poetry.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Just a thought ~ lose that last line

That feeling is implicit throughout ~

That last line is superfluous.

One other detail -

"wrapping it's ghost" should be "wrapping its ghost"