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Click herePerfect contentment ~ found in dreams ~ as two lovers seek that elusive happiness.
I am more concerned about some of the cliches that are almost inevitable when you have a poem about a very popular topic. I don't know how to avoid them completely, which is why I very rarely use this particular theme in my own poetry.
Just a thought ~ lose that last line
That feeling is implicit throughout ~
That last line is superfluous.
One other detail -
"wrapping it's ghost" should be "wrapping its ghost"