- Erotic Poetry
- indulgence
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Click here"Indulge me."
As if I wouldn't.
As if there were anything
I would not do for her.
But knowing me
as she does,
words are my playthings.
(I can see her rolling her eyes
at my lurid smile.)
I must twist the meaning
in my own decadent way.
Indulge.
To offer an indulgence.
The manner in which a priest
could offer forgiveness
of a sin yet to be committed.
So I sigh,
with a silent groan,
and wonder what sin
she has in mind.
- COMMENTS
Angelineabout 13 years agoand this poem confirms it in a lovely sexy way. I do wonder about the narrator in this poem though because it's about you and her but seems to be addressed to someone else (the reader I know). I think it would be stronger overall if you kept it between "I" and "you." That would make it feel more intimate which I think you want with this kind of poem. But....just my opinion, dahling. xxoo
Esperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years agosin and priest contrast highlights the verse, and one can understand the feeling. Hopefully most have felt the same intensity.
