Your Eyes

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Eyes like burnished gold
coast across my face;
Studied intensity.
Calloused hands
provoke sensual havoc,
progress steadily
over aroused limbs.
Nipples pebble, reach.
Breathing suspended.
My very core weeping,
aching. Waiting.
Your ravenous eyes
create a wanton -
ever craving. Reaching.
Lost in hard arms
relying on your strength.
There was never sexual
intoxication – until now.

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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 13 years ago
There is a real driving force to this poem

Hope the havoc and sexual intoxication had a wonderful source. M

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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As has been said already it is very clichéd although I do like the last two lines

tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

It's all about the eyes.....well done :)

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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This is one line, I've never seen.-Good

Nipples pebble, reach.

The others, well, cliched

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