Wadded Red Lace

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PoetGuy
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It was not the way she handed him
the damp undergarment, nor
her slitted eyes, her half-smile,
her snake tongue flicking at the air for scent.
It was that the lace was wet. And why.

After mojo_cat's story "Coffeeshop."

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
*****

I thought I'd already commented on this one.

Five.

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
Not mad about the snake line

But otherwise fucking fantastic. Smooth moves poetguy!

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years ago
F@$K

you just got me wet! So little and so much. I love, love, love, love few words that ripen thought, leaving the brain to do the what and why. My brain did a twist a something soaked.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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Mmmm very erotic with no wasted words

Maria2394Maria2394about 13 years ago
my goodness!

I don't know WHAT to say except I would have given it a little green E... I think it's the best I've ever read from you. Makes me want more and that is a wonderful thing for a poem to accomplish. 5 is not high enough.

~ maria

ps, mojo_cat is <i>Gooooood</i>, isn't she :)

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