- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Rant #3
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this is not me being poetic, this is me venting...
YO FUCK THE MAN!!! who is he???
some blown up scum- born to repress me?
and how bout she with that vacant glaze
and side-show talk to fuck up my day!
both he and she and me and we
resurface through the debauchery
to come up quick; but still after me
as i blast up, than down the void to be
so i obliterate the trauma plaguing my mind
content enough to retract than fly,
click my heels 3 times than spit to the sky
good luck mutha fucker, it's a fitting good bye
- COMMENTS
theognisabout 13 years agoThis is a very interesting poem, as is the other one you've submitted. You used the word 'than' twice in this one when 'then' is what you meant, and there are all kinds of spelling errors in your other poem. Nevertheless, I find both of them exceptional, so this vote is for both, owing to the fact you don't allow voting on your first.
Five.
twelveooneabout 13 years agoI think it's your's:
dawn diddy
dawnd on me that ur a pawmpuss arse
This is a great line:
good luck mutha fucker, it's a fitting good bye
UnderYourSpellabout 13 years agoI rather like this oh I could pick holes in all sorts of ways but for a vent all I can say is you go girl!!
