A Pregnant Portent

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vrosej10
vrosej10
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under night rain
             she finds a baby
                                  doll
it takes a breath              
               meets her gaze
                               wails
 its legs break off
                do not bleed
                          the rain gets heavier

vrosej10
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
bleh

anon does not like this one. bore ring, stupid shapes do nothing for poetry. 2

and sum 1 will complain about anon leaving a 2, but they say nothing about anon leaving 5 s and good comments. hippo crits, both the raving hose

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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I've had weird dreams like this too and they leave my empty womb and heart sad for days

theognistheognisabout 13 years ago
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Not easily, but a five.

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years agoAuthor
Go chip!

Got it in one.

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