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- the break of you
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so naked shamed upon the brink of fall, for you
I can not fail, for there is only, all
the way
tamed sound and fury, fade to white
noised ocean whispers – inviolate
my arms are waiting
for the break of you
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twelveooneabout 13 years agoA5
I like the construction of the unnamed waves breaking in the last four lines, explain "inviolate", looks like it was just kind of stuck there.
