- Non-Erotic Poetry
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I can't undo
what time has written
alone I suffer
my grave mistake
having pursued
a love forsaken
coming to terms
with loves heartbreak
try as I may
our time was over
having no future
from the start
Michael H. Bodor
Copyright © 2011
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IMspideyover 12 years agoAuthorThat is the point exactly my friend,
Such relationships almost always come to an abrupt end, leaving only hurt and confusion...
PoissonSurLaLunealmost 13 years agoI really liked the rhythm as I read it aloud. My one quibble is that the end felt metrically unsatisfying to me, like you just stopped even though from the perspective of the words it makes a lot of sense.
