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withlovel
withlovel
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(this poem reads normally until you reach the BANG!-second person starts at bottom and reads up to the BANG!)I hope you enjoy!©withlovel.


Kissing you softly,
seductively,
my hand gently holds your face.

Your lips...
so soft...
so delicious...
The kiss is long and slow.

Deeper...
as I kiss you
our lips caress,
my tongue is tasting yours.

I pull you in
tightly to my chest.
As my hands glide
down the contours of your back.

I grip your round hot ass
forcing you hard against my hips,
as they begin to grind.

I feel...
a tension mounting
something more
I must explore

BANG!!!- We must finish what we started.


I must explore.
something more
a tension mounting
I feel...

as they begin to grind.
pulling you hard against my hips,
I grip your firm buttocks

then down your back.
across your shoulders,
as my hands glide,
firmly to my milky breasts.
I pull you in

our tongues are intertwined.
our lips move effortlessly as,
as I kiss you
Deeper...

the kiss is so romantic.
so tender...
so soft...
Your lips...
my hand sweetly holds onto to yours.
sensually,
Kissing me gently,

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withlovel
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Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 12 years ago
Tazz & Tzara ?

U have T ,Z & A in common in your names : are you related ?

TzaraTzaraalmost 12 years ago
You stated that "[you] enjoy honesty" so

let me be quite honest. The concept of the poem is somewhat interesting, but I don't think it works, if for no other reason than one can't get a good sense of the simultaneity of the two voices because reading them is way too linear in spatially different ways. Putting the two narratives side-by-side might work better, but that would not work well with the effect you're trying to create, I think.

Other than the concept, the poem seems pretty ordinary to me, with no particularly remarkable, or even out of the ordinary, images.

I guess I like the concept of this more than the execution, if that makes sense.

withlovelwithlovelalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you all for reading and please VOTE.

Tazz,

Thank you, for your comments. It is nice to see that some one is reading and enjoying, (not meaning or assuming that you like what I write) just saying it's nice to see comments.

respectfully yours,

Liberator

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
COULD BE AN ALTERNATE TO THE BIG BANG THEORY

or is it Play Misty for Me. TK U MLJ LV NV

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