Passionate Anger

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TENSE. RESTLESSNESS.

THINKING. FEELING.

ANGER. ANNOYANCE.

TAKE ME. USE ME.

SHOW ME. DOMINATE ME.

BEAT MY ASS. MAKE IT RED.

FUCK ME. HARD. HARDER.

DON'T STOP. MAKE ME CRY OUTLOUD.

MAKE ME FEEL YOU. MAKE ME KNOW THAT IT IS YOU.

MAKE ME CUM. FILL ME WITH YOURS.

HOLD ME CLOSE. HOLD ME TENDERLY.

LET ME KNOW THAT YOU CARE.

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sunshinegirl05sunshinegirl05over 11 years agoAuthor

That's what I thought, BBB. You have to look at what the writing is about...and read it in that mindset...in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
The All Caps

Makes it more intense and the anger really comes through.

sunshinegirl05sunshinegirl05over 11 years agoAuthor

@RickyChampagne Thank you...and yes you have. I'm glad you still enjoy it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Intense

I like this one. I have told you that before.

sunshinegirl05sunshinegirl05over 11 years agoAuthor

When I wrote this piece, I felt anger and frustration. This was the way it came out...and I felt that this was the only way it could be written.

Thank you for reading, critiquing, and voting on it. I do appreciate hearing people's opinions.

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