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demure101
demure101
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Most people say they're coming
   For the music, voices humming,
And the rapture and the glasses' happy clinks -
   And perhaps they are not lying
   But there's surely no denying
That I only come to parties for the drinks.

   I can't stand the silly chatter
   And the unexpected clatter
Of another tray of crockery's demise;
   And I do not like to notice
   How unmusical a throat is
After three cigars and Dubonnet on ice.

   When the voices grow too groggy
   And the owners get too soggy
And the blasted fumes take over from old cares
   I surely won't get mixed in it –
   I pour another drink and flit
And continue reading novels on the stairs.

   I suppose that there is no one
   As will ever cause me throw one
But if it should chance to happen, have your fun –
   Shan't be there to spoil your pleasure:
   As it's privacy I treasure,
After having thrown that party I will run!


demure101
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DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Party Pooper!

*chuckles* Actually, I'm not much for "fun" like this, either, so I fully appreciate the way the speaker starts out happily enough, but ends up deserting at the first opportunity! That sounds like me! *grins*

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 11 years ago
A pleasant piece of silliness

The first verse is brilliant but it does seem to fade away after that. There again I suppose getting into one's cups is anti climactic - a little like the way this verse is shaped.

Not sure if the line in verse four " I surely won't get mixed in it –" quite scans with the rest of the verse - the rhythm seems slightly forced.

Sweet O.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE WALL FLOWERS LAMENT

for being shy and retiring, TK U MLJ LV NV