Fallen Angel

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DawnJ
DawnJ
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No storm today,
just a long, dusty,
disappearing country road.

He sighed again.
Sometimes he dared
to wonder, for a spell,

which fate was worse –
the deadly tempest
or this road to nowhere.

He closed his wings.
A decoration, merely,
for jibes and jests to tear.

He felt the end,
the distant nothing
of the endless step.

No storm today.
A narrow, dusty way...
his nightmare never-ending.

DawnJ
DawnJ
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twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
would help

for a little more flesh on the poetic bones, what i'm getting is some fallen angel going nowhere, and i generally have an overactive imagination

4ed

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
DESCRIPTIVE NARRATION

by a lost soul and weary traveler, TK U MLJ LV NV

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
The road, probably -

the hell of your own making couldn´t be outdone by any other´s...

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